omg!
i absolutely love it. the intro you say? the intro sounds like it should have that "whoop" like just before the lyrics come in. like "...*whOOP* Hey pretty...". keep the cymbal crash & the bass drum there, but i guess you can intensify it. that would give it a dramatic entrance & keep the listener going. it kept me going! :D
keep the lyrics! those are some amazing lyrics & the way it sounds it just amazing.
5/5 10/10 & download despite it being a Demo. probably one of the best demos iv heard, ever.